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Post by Ladd Russo of the Russo Family on Jun 10, 2008 19:42:01 GMT -5
She nodded serenely, and light seemed to glow around her, larger and brighter until she was no longer visible in its brilliance. Then it snuffed off like a candle, leaving nothing.
(Congratulations, Bbenjii, you have passed the Ghost Shipyard Tutorial! You are now advised to hurry off to magic class, which already started. While you are allowed to come in late, it is sometimes better to just pretend your character was there the whole time, in the back or something. Believe me, it's easier... >< However, almost all places in the school are open to you. Besides the classroom, you are allowed to be in one other relevant board, not counting spam boards. So have fun! =D
As your Master Teacher and Guide, I'm obligated to give some advice. I enjoyed the imagination and attention you put into your posts, but some were very awkward to read. This could most likely be remedied by a quick read-over of your post before posting. Also, I noticed you have just a small confusion in quotations. The standard in normal quotes is a comma, and then an uncapitalized letter, which obviously changes under exclamations or questions. Example: "I love kittens," she said. "I love kittens!" she shouted. "I love kittens?" she asked.
I hope this helps, and I hope you have a great time at Twilight Moon! Don't hesitate to PM me. I'll have your siggy box tomorrow, but alas I really need to study now, and yeah, once I've got that done your orb will go in your bank.)
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