Angelus
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Suzume's Squishy Student - Angelus[M:2120][M:1100]
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Post by Angelus on Feb 4, 2007 10:45:06 GMT -5
Angelus collapsed to the ground. He was tired and he hardly had any energy left within him. His vision began to blur and his body was fighting itself over whether or not to close his eyes. He could not let pen have an open attack.
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Pendragon
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Post by Pendragon on Feb 4, 2007 11:06:24 GMT -5
Pendragon twisted the middle part of his ring, the red part. Slowly, ever so slowly, he started to walk towards Angelus. Gradually picking up pace, colour returning to his face. Aswell as a smile. The Vigilante ring had worked its magic again, restoring Pendragons energy. He pulled Angelus' own short sword out his chest and spun it downwards. Sliding to halt, as the blade kissed his enemys neck.
(It's sorta like a sugar rush, he'll back to almost powerless soon)
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Angelus
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Suzume's Squishy Student - Angelus[M:2120][M:1100]
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Post by Angelus on Feb 4, 2007 12:22:27 GMT -5
Angelus squinted his eyes tightly as he felt the cold end of the blade touch his neck. He could feel each individual rivet in the blade that was eager to cut his neck. He was hoping that if he was to not make a move, Pen would not be prompted to attack. He lied still and conserved his energy until it was almost at its full potential. Angelus had to make one fluid motion in order to not put his life at risk.
Angelus threw his let hand onto the blade at the same time his pushed with his right hand on the ground, launching himself into the air. While his was in the air, he performed a spinning move with his body and allowed his feet to split apart and perform a spinning kick towards Pen.
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Pendragon
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Post by Pendragon on Feb 4, 2007 12:29:52 GMT -5
Pendragon tilted his head to the side, to clear the hair out of his vision. Still grinning, he leapt up just enough to clear the ground. The he pulled his body out horizontally, spinning round in a move called a butterfly. He swung his leg out on the third spin, aiming it for a collision with Angelus' ankle. A hit would hook onto Angelus, and pull him to the ground.
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Angelus
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Suzume's Squishy Student - Angelus[M:2120][M:1100]
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Post by Angelus on Feb 4, 2007 12:45:10 GMT -5
Angelus thought he would feel his foot make contact with Pen's head, but instead he felt another foot. He tried to move his head to the side to see what was going on. His eyes met Pen's and he knew that this was not going to be good. Pen's foot caught his and he was forced to the ground.
He was not on the ground for long, though. He thrusted his hands into the ground and launched himself into the air. He landed on his feet and thrusted an air current at Pen who was still falling to the ground.
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Pendragon
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Post by Pendragon on Feb 4, 2007 13:43:36 GMT -5
The air thrust shoved Pendragon back, still rotating horizontally through the air. He slammed a hand to the floor, transfering his air roll to a ground one. Bouncing up to his feet, he threw a duo of flames at Angelus. Already his adrenaline rush was coming to an end, Gotta make the best of it.
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Angelus
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Post by Angelus on Feb 4, 2007 14:36:53 GMT -5
((pen..i updated your siggy, but your level might be off, so you can post that update if needed))
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Pendragon
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Post by Pendragon on Feb 4, 2007 14:40:39 GMT -5
((Thanks))
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Angelus
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Post by Angelus on Feb 4, 2007 14:54:36 GMT -5
Angelus began to back away from Pen when the barrage of fire balls came for him. These fireballs were much more faster than the first set and Angelus was caught off guard. He shot multiple sprays of air at the fireballs suing his index finger, but he was only able to stop a few. The rest bombarded Angelus and threw him back. He crawled to his feet, having much of his clothes singed.
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Pendragon
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Post by Pendragon on Feb 5, 2007 11:46:45 GMT -5
Pendragon was running out of adrenaline, he had time for just one more attack. He dashed forward, and brought his leg up high. He was so flexible, he managed to pull it paralel to the rest of his body. Then, the second it was perfectly vertical, he slammed it straight down towards Angelus' head.
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Angelus
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Suzume's Squishy Student - Angelus[M:2120][M:1100]
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Post by Angelus on Feb 5, 2007 15:39:49 GMT -5
Pen's foot came crashing down with great force. It caught Angelus in the head and brought his body to the floor. His head slammed down to the ground. Angelus' vision was blurry and all he saw was a foot on his head. He had no energy left to fight.
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Pendragon
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Post by Pendragon on Feb 5, 2007 15:45:33 GMT -5
Pendragon dropped the sword to the floor, and whipped out a pistol from under his coat. Slowly, because he was having difficulty seeing clearly, he aimed it at Angelus. No intention to fire of course, but Angelus wouldn't know that. "...Game...Over.." He panted, loss of blood got to him before he could strike a final pose, and he fell backwards. The pistol bounced out his hand as he hit the floor.
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Post by Señor Sunday Friday on Feb 5, 2007 16:06:34 GMT -5
Angelus: 'were much more faster' 'rapped' 'ini' 'borught'... I believe you meant, 'were much faster' 'wrapped' 'in' and 'brought'. You're posts were pretty random when it came to their length and I remember a one-liner in there too. Try to get a more even flow of longer posts next time. I still liked how you role played your character when he grew tired, kudos for that since he was vulnerable though not despie-ish. Your vocabulary was pretty good but none of those words that are like "Oh my god... I'm going to save that one for later..." but still, they were pretty good.
7/10
Pendragon I didn't see any typos or misspellings, ooor bad grammar that stood out too much, except your misspelling of 'parallel' but that's it. You're knowledge of martial arts comes through in your RPing or your character. Your posts are nice like Angelus' but not quite as impressive because the use of some adjectives don't exactly seem to fit well and make the post look somewhat awkward such as 'bounced' when refferring to the pistol since you don't usually see a gun bounce, same goes for your leg being paralel (fix: parallel) to the rest of his body. Paralell: extending in the same direction, equidistant at all points, and never converging or diverging. (definition from Dictionary.com) That implies that your leg is not touching, or connected to your body which is honestly not what I think you meant by your post.
6.5/10 (almost made it!)
Last Note: Not much powerplaying, and I'd like to commend that. You guys seemed to like the words, 'toward,' and others of that sort so as to make it a suggestion. Then they know what's coming and can choose whether or not to change what was going to happen, wonderful strategy for a fight-style RP.
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Pendragon
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Post by Pendragon on Feb 5, 2007 16:14:54 GMT -5
"Winner-Angelus" Came a loud voice, from nowhere in particular. Pendragon was beyond caring, he'd had a good time, even if he had got bashed up. "Congratz.." He whispered, not having the strength to talk at a normal level. He would be, "using his libary voice", in the words of some teacher who was most likely way past his prime. He breathed heavily, and carefully brushed his hand over the wound in his chest. "Ow. You got me pretty good."
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Angelus
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Suzume's Squishy Student - Angelus[M:2120][M:1100]
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Post by Angelus on Feb 5, 2007 16:51:37 GMT -5
Angelus could barely comprehend what was going on as he climbed up. He shook Pen's hand and walked out of the arena.
((I swear I spell checked that...the proboards spell check is not the best))
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