~ ?c Fang Quien ?c ~ [DONE]

[Urune Hiname]

Name
Fang-chan
Age
19
Date of Birth
January 22nd
School:
America Alice Academy
Company
Easter Company
Homelands
Tokyo, Japan
Races
Angels
Classes
Ninja/ Elementalist
Final
Protects Her World
She protects her own life by doing what she could save her world and families. She doesnt likes anyone destroy her world. She tries her best not loose her world. She fails she'll died for good. (Fang doesn't want to died alone without her sister Leana). She focus her strenght. And started fighting enemies. She might need to pratice training all day. But if she lost her balances she have to try it again next time


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{Personality}
Fang-chan's personality is she could protect her world, her country and government. Her only mission is to save the whole world by not killing people but there bad souls.

When she train her powers and her strength is by practice how strong she really are. So if a thief or an enemy of her's tries to kill. She'll be using her Elemental Sword. That kills anybody who touches her. (seriously)

When she gets bored of training and saving worlds all the time. She usually goes to the books store and read lots of mangas.

While she visits her little brother from her friends house. Her brother Ito Nao loves to sleep with his sister's friends house.

Sometimes, she suck humans blood only once a week. She be back to normal. She has lots of thoughts that she could actually work it out.

Likes

+ Eating Ice Cream
+ Snow
+ Ice
+ Invention
+ Training
+ Singing
+ Listening Japanese Albums
+ Watching Anime "Shugo Chara" (My favorite)
+ Strawberries and Banana (Healthy for my strength)
+ Reading Anime Mangas (Except: Kitchen Princess, Shugo Chara, Gakuen Alice)
+ My Little Brother Ito Nao
+ Babysitting my little brother


Dis Likes

+ Hot Water
+ Ghost
+ Snakes
+ Spiders
+ Boys
+ Nicknames (I hate them)
+ Parents

{Weapon Information}
Elemental Sword

This weapon can easily cut you in half, its has flames of water and fire that combine to together. O.O the shapes is a little bit different.
[enchantments]
.:Powers:.
.:Flames:. When you touch fire. You'll burn your whole body. Inside her body its all pain. Til she kill every enemy whole try to kill her.
.:Water Attack:. It attacks somehow who killed there friends and families. By Water and Ice to together and freeze them to deafth. Only when i hold it about 60 minutes of mixumium. She let it go. And deaf the other bad guys.
.:Thunder/Lighting/Fire:. If the Thunder and Lighting combines with Water and Fire. That will be hard to control. Thunder is strongest, Lighting is strong, Fire is strong. that combines a big attack. I can fly up and connect with the Lighting and thunder to gether and make it strong. then what you thing.

.:Limitations:.
- This is the strongest power for this sword that became Fang's belongings own Thunder elemental fire power. That heats her body metaling.
- she use water to cool her strength and power down.
- She will use her limited to be strong or weak. Sometimes strong when she get so mad and insane to lose her control and killed every person could touch her.
{Armour Information}
She use her suits to destory her own bad soul. For her reason she cant explain she keep it as a secret for her master she could tell whats the problem. She'll train about 10 months to control everything. And started to fight.

{Accessory Information}
Ties, Hat, Choker, Ying-Yang necklace. And some clothes to wear on under is a Red Tank top, tight jeans, and some her converse or boots. Boots she wears it for raining day. for Converse she wears it sometime summer for her to train.

{Accessory Information}
What it does?:Its only for her protection. And she also use it when she feels like it.

Physical Education
She usually use her weapons for emergency or mission. If someone needs her. She use her single illiusion bomb. (Hey its hard for me to memories everything. Just given u few not all of them) She probalby do something finished up training and finding a new partner for her self.


And also she teaches some of her clan how to handle a weapon without losing balances. Causal sometimes she do something she think about what she'll do or not. she use something to make her dodge something.
{Background}

{Picture}

[Urune Hiname]

I'm almost done don't worry. I might need to correct but need help with it.
Thanks for viewing!
Miki-chan

[Arual]

PLEASE STICK TO THE REGISTRATION FORMAT!!!!!!!!!!!

Thankyou

[Ladd Russo of the Russo Family]

Aru-chan, I think that is unfair. She has stuck to the registration info, and added more. We have nothing against that, and some of our best forms have done it before.

However, demongirl, you might want to read the rules. They require a special something in every student's form, and you won't be accepted until you do.

[Arual]

Sorry, My apologies, Demongirl14. ><

I take that back, and forgive my spazzness. There's been a lot going on with my family lately, school, and other things that at points I can be a little unjust. I think I've spazzed on six people in the last three days or so, and it wasn't fair.


I think it's pretty nice you listed her extras for things she likes and whatnot. *yawns* Chaos for wanting to get into a 4-year college has made me irratible......and again, my apologies. Zawa's right.

[Urune Hiname]

Look you guys. I don't want to get mad ok. But I didn't copy any students form. Cuz I found some of my ideas so usually need to use two windows so I could do my own not there's I told Li-Wa about it. She help me with some forms that I need to do.

[Ladd Russo of the Russo Family]

0o I didn't think that you did. Once Witchcraft comes along, I'm sure he can grade you.

[Urune Hiname]

Thank you Lorien-chan.

[Arual]

Remember, this isn't to gang up on you- this is to help you see things you may want to fix, improve on, and learn from in the future and to finalize you into the Ghost Shipyards! It's just a critique, so take it in and fix whatever you can! Okie dokie? ^___________^

Okay, demongirl14, the first bit of it is perfectly alright as far as I can see; though I'd think it'd be a lot cooler if you added some detail to your FINAL, you know? Also, what is COMPANY? '

On the note of your FINAL, protecting the world is a more of a motive than it is a magical power or weapon special. Even if it sucks, put something in. You can always change it later. I had....^^

Like I said in the C-box about the one paragraph and the multi-colors, the color is good. I won't pester you more on that note.. ^^ However, I do LOOOOVE the orange and green together. It's complimented well, and it doesn't hurt my eyes like the red and orange and such has. Agh to red and orange!!! xD

Oui vei (sp?). Go through spell check and make sure all your words are corrected as well as grammer and punctuation. ( For now- I've seen more in spelling that anything else...) Make sure you have all the right forms of certain words and such- I know we all sometimes do it- like I had accidently the other night with the word 'throw'. xD I put 'through'.....and didn't realize until and hour later! Make sure your sentences make sense as well!

The section of PERSONALITY could really go more into her background- and it doesn't look like you have one there....unless it's that sentence above the word 'Background'. Remember it has to be two paragraphs at the least- and get creative! I know you can do it! You proved that to us by putting likes and dislikes into the form!!!!

Onto the topic of descrption. Now, I don't mind the picture- and while they say its worth a thousand words....it's kind of required. (Not my rules, I'm just the messenger) So try to describe her in your best possible way for us, hm? sometimes the best characters are the ones we make from scratch without a picture.....


Well, I think there's not a lot more to say, but let's give you time to swallow and repair all this first- and go from there, aye?

[Urune Hiname]

thx. Arual

[Urune Hiname]

What why? *cries* TTT__TTT wahhhhhhhhh

[Urune Hiname]

What why? *cries* TTT__TTT wahhhhhhhhh. I'm only 14. Gimme a chance *cries harder*

[Urune Hiname]

Ok you guys. I'm done what need to be done.

[Ladd Russo of the Russo Family]

The Twilight Moon Academy Staff are very sorry, Demongirl14, but we have decided that you are not ready for this site. We're glad that you tried, but you are only 14, we feel your roleplaying skills are not developed enough yet. Maybe in a few years, when you've had some more schooling and experience, you'll be ready for this kind of thing. As for now, there are plenty of other roleplaying sites on the internet with different standards that we are sure you'd have no problem joining, and have a lot of fun besides. Whatever you decide, we wish you good luck and would like to remind you that this is no way personal.

[Urune Hiname]

What kind of age? That i could actually entered for from here.