Post by zanza on May 23, 2008 22:12:54 GMT -5
Name- Soren Altair
Age- 17
Date of Birth- February 15
Homelands- Raven's Point, a small town that is mainly agricultural. It is poor and villagers often find themselves hard pressed to find meals for the day. Traders often pass by, heading to bigger towns. It is a hard place to live, but the villagers there have a sense of pride and would never leave.
Race- Human
Class- Black Mage
Final- Breaking Point
Soren often activates his final when he's frustrated or on the point of losing control. He gathers all the magical energy to his limit in his body. This often changes his appearance and manner. He starts to gether past his limit, using his staff as a focus. This can result in changes in the landscape and weather. Then he realeases it all at one moment, through his staff. This will destroy anything it comes into contact with completely. This would drain him of all his energy and may even kill him if he uses up too much.
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{Weapon information}
Ether Cloud, Stave.
Ether Cloud is 8 feet and is a sky blue color that contrasts its dark power. It is made out of oak wood and is very sturdy. It is wrapped where his hands usually are so to avoid splinters and can be used as a walking staff.
Cursed Treatise, Grimoire
He also carries a dark black grimoire where he writes all the spells in. It looks like a normal spellbook but when he touches it, it transforms into a spellbook. It comes with a pen and ink and contains many pages. He holds onto this like he holds onto his life and it is one of his most treasures possesions.
{Armour Information}
Crystal Web . Cloak
He wears a pitch black robe that is a little loose for him and has a flowy feeling. It is comfortable but can be inhibiting when he has to move fast. Underneathe he is wearing very light clothing [undershirts,cloth pants, etc.]. It has a hood in case the weather takes a turn for the worse.
It has one enchantment put on it by its old wearer that is still in effect. It gave the claok the name of crystal web. When activated anything that hits his cloak will become stuck as webs start to wrap around it. It takes a mesure of concentration to keep a hold of it.
{Accessory Information}
Spell Components
On his belt he keeps all the spell components he may need for his rituals and spells. He guards them and keeps them secret from his enemies and friends. These can involve leaves from a certain tree, ordinary sand, dirt from foreign soil, etc.
Medicine
Since he is very sick he always keeps his medicine with hih. He takes the liquid in small doses, and only when he starts to feel weak or starts to cough. It is in a small bottle on his belt.
{Physical Description}
Soren has dark black hair and is very pale. He is around five foot 7 inches and weighs around 130 pounds. He is very thin with almost no muscle tone. He looks very sickly and his green eyes look tired all the time. He wears his black robes most of the time, finding them more comfortable to any uniform. His staff is usually in his hand and his book is in a bag on his back. He often wears his hood down but he will put it up if it heightens the effect of an entrance. He is wearing travel boots that look odd on his frail body.
{Background}
Soren was born to a poor family in the poorer town of Raven's point. His dad was a woodcutter and his mom sowed and made clothing to sell. He was born in a very harsh winter for the village and contracted a sickness when he was very young, making him very weak. He couldn't go outside and play with the other children. Instead, he spent his days indoors, watching them with envy. Soon, the neighbourhood kids had developped a rumour that he was a monster and he was often made fun of. Nobody would approach the house. He became very lonely and bitter. His parents weren't sure what to do, and they ignored him, often bieng unnerved by his looks and his glares. He was allowed to the books in his father's study but he quickly finished them, having an affinity for reading.
One day When he was looking outside his window, he saw a colourful wagon pass by. It seemed that someone had just bought a new house across from his [though he wondered why anyone would want a house in Raven's Point]. As the man walked out he saw his attendant carrying massive amounts of books. He became interested and decided the next day he would go outside. When he stepped outside the light blinded him and made a sharp contrast with his pale skin. He stepped wobbily, losing strength quickly. He let himself in to his new neighbour's house. He eventually found the other man's study and began to read. The first book he read was called Cursed Treatise. He frustratingly found that there were no words, but after a few pages words started to appear. It was a strange language, but the wierd words came to his lips with a familiarity. When the old man first saw him he was angry and reprimanded the boy for sneaking in but when he saw the younger's ability for magic, he became amused. He organised magic lessons for the boy. Soren attended these eagerly, wanting to find out everything about this weapon that was not physical.
Soon the old mage discovered the boy's illness and gave him medicine. Their bond strengthened until Soren thought of him as a grandpa. His parents were just glad he found a hobby. His mentor was glad to have found a promising student and finally Soren was glad to have found a way to get back at those he envied for so long. He visioned himself ruling over the strong.
Finally it was the day that he was going to start learning real magic. His mentor had promised him that when he turned 16 he could begin and advance from theory. When he stepped out the dorr [now bieng able to walk normally for a short period of tim thanks to the medicine he saw a crowd outsed the door. The people of Raven's Point were a superstitious people and magic was taboo. One of them through a torch and the house caught on fire. The old man tried to defend himself, but against so many he didn's have a chance. He ran into the house, coughing all the way and grabbed three things. His master's staff, grimoire, and robe. After saying a silent prayer for his master and a vow to take revenge at the town he left.
He wandered for a year, using what little he knew of magic to earn money. He evntually was led to where the Academy for the gifted was. He saw this as a step on his way to becoming powerful and eventually taking revenge on the world that made him frail.
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Age- 17
Date of Birth- February 15
Homelands- Raven's Point, a small town that is mainly agricultural. It is poor and villagers often find themselves hard pressed to find meals for the day. Traders often pass by, heading to bigger towns. It is a hard place to live, but the villagers there have a sense of pride and would never leave.
Race- Human
Class- Black Mage
Final- Breaking Point
Soren often activates his final when he's frustrated or on the point of losing control. He gathers all the magical energy to his limit in his body. This often changes his appearance and manner. He starts to gether past his limit, using his staff as a focus. This can result in changes in the landscape and weather. Then he realeases it all at one moment, through his staff. This will destroy anything it comes into contact with completely. This would drain him of all his energy and may even kill him if he uses up too much.
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{Weapon information}
Ether Cloud, Stave.
Ether Cloud is 8 feet and is a sky blue color that contrasts its dark power. It is made out of oak wood and is very sturdy. It is wrapped where his hands usually are so to avoid splinters and can be used as a walking staff.
Cursed Treatise, Grimoire
He also carries a dark black grimoire where he writes all the spells in. It looks like a normal spellbook but when he touches it, it transforms into a spellbook. It comes with a pen and ink and contains many pages. He holds onto this like he holds onto his life and it is one of his most treasures possesions.
{Armour Information}
Crystal Web . Cloak
He wears a pitch black robe that is a little loose for him and has a flowy feeling. It is comfortable but can be inhibiting when he has to move fast. Underneathe he is wearing very light clothing [undershirts,cloth pants, etc.]. It has a hood in case the weather takes a turn for the worse.
It has one enchantment put on it by its old wearer that is still in effect. It gave the claok the name of crystal web. When activated anything that hits his cloak will become stuck as webs start to wrap around it. It takes a mesure of concentration to keep a hold of it.
{Accessory Information}
Spell Components
On his belt he keeps all the spell components he may need for his rituals and spells. He guards them and keeps them secret from his enemies and friends. These can involve leaves from a certain tree, ordinary sand, dirt from foreign soil, etc.
Medicine
Since he is very sick he always keeps his medicine with hih. He takes the liquid in small doses, and only when he starts to feel weak or starts to cough. It is in a small bottle on his belt.
{Physical Description}
Soren has dark black hair and is very pale. He is around five foot 7 inches and weighs around 130 pounds. He is very thin with almost no muscle tone. He looks very sickly and his green eyes look tired all the time. He wears his black robes most of the time, finding them more comfortable to any uniform. His staff is usually in his hand and his book is in a bag on his back. He often wears his hood down but he will put it up if it heightens the effect of an entrance. He is wearing travel boots that look odd on his frail body.
{Background}
Soren was born to a poor family in the poorer town of Raven's point. His dad was a woodcutter and his mom sowed and made clothing to sell. He was born in a very harsh winter for the village and contracted a sickness when he was very young, making him very weak. He couldn't go outside and play with the other children. Instead, he spent his days indoors, watching them with envy. Soon, the neighbourhood kids had developped a rumour that he was a monster and he was often made fun of. Nobody would approach the house. He became very lonely and bitter. His parents weren't sure what to do, and they ignored him, often bieng unnerved by his looks and his glares. He was allowed to the books in his father's study but he quickly finished them, having an affinity for reading.
One day When he was looking outside his window, he saw a colourful wagon pass by. It seemed that someone had just bought a new house across from his [though he wondered why anyone would want a house in Raven's Point]. As the man walked out he saw his attendant carrying massive amounts of books. He became interested and decided the next day he would go outside. When he stepped outside the light blinded him and made a sharp contrast with his pale skin. He stepped wobbily, losing strength quickly. He let himself in to his new neighbour's house. He eventually found the other man's study and began to read. The first book he read was called Cursed Treatise. He frustratingly found that there were no words, but after a few pages words started to appear. It was a strange language, but the wierd words came to his lips with a familiarity. When the old man first saw him he was angry and reprimanded the boy for sneaking in but when he saw the younger's ability for magic, he became amused. He organised magic lessons for the boy. Soren attended these eagerly, wanting to find out everything about this weapon that was not physical.
Soon the old mage discovered the boy's illness and gave him medicine. Their bond strengthened until Soren thought of him as a grandpa. His parents were just glad he found a hobby. His mentor was glad to have found a promising student and finally Soren was glad to have found a way to get back at those he envied for so long. He visioned himself ruling over the strong.
Finally it was the day that he was going to start learning real magic. His mentor had promised him that when he turned 16 he could begin and advance from theory. When he stepped out the dorr [now bieng able to walk normally for a short period of tim thanks to the medicine he saw a crowd outsed the door. The people of Raven's Point were a superstitious people and magic was taboo. One of them through a torch and the house caught on fire. The old man tried to defend himself, but against so many he didn's have a chance. He ran into the house, coughing all the way and grabbed three things. His master's staff, grimoire, and robe. After saying a silent prayer for his master and a vow to take revenge at the town he left.
He wandered for a year, using what little he knew of magic to earn money. He evntually was led to where the Academy for the gifted was. He saw this as a step on his way to becoming powerful and eventually taking revenge on the world that made him frail.
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