Look look! Hopeless wrote a poem, EEK!

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Where did it all go?

She has no passion,
She has no potential,
She doesn't believe,
That life is crucial.
She thinks she's worthless,
She's destined for nothing,
She wonders why she's here,
If she's lost everything.
Nobody can convince her,
To do anything worthwhile,
She feels broken inside,
She's not able to smile.
She has nobody to talk to,
And nowhere to hide,
She wants to stay alone,
She feels she's already died.
She doesn't really care,
About what anyone says,
Why should she listen,
When her hurt just stays.
Enclosed in her feelings,
Captured in her soul,
Shattered into peices,
Nobody to make her whole.

YUP XD

[L.A.C.R.I.M.O.S.A]

Since no one had the balls to post a decent comment, I shall giveth you a goooood one. ^^

Over all, 'twas very good! ^^ I liked it, and it sound like you really put your heart into it. Very well written. =D I find myself really drawn to it because in one way or another, we can all relate to it. It includes a wide spectrum of people and how they always seem to doubt themselves and think their lives worthless, pushing on and on for a cause that might not even exist. And it even goes on to touch the subject of finding that "special someone" which is always a very popular- AND effective- theme in poetry. Very nice poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it. ^^ Keep it up!

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Oooo, thanks so much, *Beams*, see, you made me smile there!

I was doubting myself very much at that time because i left school and had no idea what to do with myself...

I still don't!

But i'm much more possitive now ^-^ !

I'm getting a job soon, i'm determined!

[sexyvampire89]

oooo cool poem I like it ^^

[L.A.C.R.I.M.O.S.A]

Good! We need more determined people in the world. No more of those low-lives who deal crack in the back alleys or those who sit at home on their couches getting drunk every night, but people who actually want to to do something with the lives they were given. =] Good for you. ^^

I think everyone goes through that period in which they really don't know where to go next. But then, some inspiration comes along, like this poem, and we suddenly find a whole new world of opportunities right before our very eyes. ^^ I sure as heck went through this stage. O.o I think teenagers are very prone to it...

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Thanks Kathy!! XD


Very true Vampy.

Well, I did go through a stadge of lying in bed all day but i actually get up and job-hunt now...XD, on tuesday i'm going shopping, and while im there im going to ask in all the clothes shops, wish me luck.

What happened to you during your ' i hate the world and i'm not doing anything ' stadge? x

[L.A.C.R.I.M.O.S.A]

Oh, you wanna know what happened? xP I was a pathetic,little emo girl who just sat around on the computer all day and moped. ^^...and had thoughts of suicide. O___o

But I'm out of that stage now! =D And I think it's all thanks to my friends. ^^.....and anime. The anime helped big time. O.o lol I'm such a geek.

I really was depressed, though, as I had no clue as to what I wanted to do when I got older. I was just bummed out about the fact that my innocence as a child faded and that soon I'd have to find a job, go off to college, and start my own career. The whole concept just frightened me to death, and I really didn't know what to do with all the mixed emotions. Even to this day, I wish I could stay a kid forever. O.o It just seems so much easier...

But, I now know that when I get older, I will become a successful novelist and be happily married to a kind, loving man. We will have about 3 or 4 children and live in a quaint, cozy home with a HUMONGOUS garden in both the front and backyard. We will also have a dog or two, and all my kids will have plenty to do in their childhood (unlike me, lol) so that they can grow up one day and look back on their lives to say, "Gee. My childhood was great. I have no regrets at all." ^^ Yep...That's my life plan.

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Well, i was so into this 'stadge' that i quit college, hence the need for a job. It was really stupid, and i was doing rather well too...but everyone makes mistakes right? I may go back to a different college in september, but who knows? I don't know what life has in store for me and i an not one to make plans but i am sure of one thing; I am going to do what i love. I hated college, so i left, i belive that you only get one life and that your deserve a chance to live it, i plan to follow my dreams and work at a horse ranch and eventually become an instucter, then, i would be doing something i love that involves my hobby (Horse-Riding)

Unfortuanatly fate doesn't want this for me quite yet, i fell off my horse last year and it buggered my back up. Now Forrest Gump ( the horses name ) was a big horse thus it was a long way down, i havn't been able to ride since. BUT, i am getting full body X-rays this month so i'm hopeful! Maybe they can fix whatever is wrong with my back and stop the daily pain ^-^

Lets hope!