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[`Katana Elaine]

Name- Katana Elaine
Age- nineteen
Date of Birth- October 28, 1991
Homelands- London, England
Race- Human
Class- Seer
Final- Beyond the eyes-

Katana also comes for a very powerful family of old magic. White magic or black magic they have done it all. When she is threatened, Katana can form a blinding flash in the sky. Although it takes a great deal of her energy to summon the power, she can hold the flash for five minutes at most. Afterwords she is completely drained and often cannot move for days at a time.
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{Weapon information}
(Surin)
The name itself is French for dagger. The blade is made out of Titanium and along the silver edge it is curvy. Perfect for thrusting into a body and jolting back and forth to make sure it’s a perfect kill. The handle of the dagger has two dragons with ruby eyes that fit’s perfectly into her hand, and the metal handle itself can give a deadly blow.

{Armour Information}
none

{Accessory Information}
(Silver Pendant of Human Duality)–
The 2" diameter silver pendant depicts a pair of identical human twins. An attuned wearer can invoke it 1/day and cause themselves to exist in two places simultaneously for up to 5 minutes. They merge back together at either the end of 5 minutes or when commanded by the wearer, whichever comes first. They share all attributes of the wearer, including a common set of Power Points, Hit Points, damage taken, fatigue, effect’s of spells. Etc. but can perform separate actions. Items removed or dropped by one, disappear from the other. The pendant only functions for human’s that is common men, mixed men, or high men.



{Physical Description}
To explain Katana is like trying to tell someone what air looks like. Many people do not make eye contact with her, but rather just see right through her. She is pretty to look at with her hair around her mid-back and the tone of a toxic looking black. Katana’s skin is often pale due to the climate of her homelands. But exotic tattoo’s in color sprawl all across her body. She often wears make up with heavy doses of black eyeliner across her eyes to distract the fog that cloaks her eyes when she has visions. It is often that you will find her in torn jeans and small t-shirts or along the lines of older style clothing. She does not really have a trend but dresses accordingly to her mood.

{Background}
Katana Elaine, it is not her real name. One of the many names she had used when she had fled her home in London. Her real name is almost long forgotten to her, they once called her Adeline Kriger. Generations of Kriger’s were born and raised in London, But a family curse followed them throughout the many years. A bad deal with a coven of vampires perhaps. Katana scarcely remembers the stories her mother used to tell her, then again she scarcely remembers her parents in general. They were hunted down in their home in London while they sent Katana to go get bread for supper. The drag marks of blood and clawed dirt started from the driveway where her mother tried to run. She was captured. She was killed, like the rest of her family. Katana knew as soon as she saw the marks that something was not right. As she reached down to touch the fresh ravaged dirt a vision wisped into her mind. Her brain was flushed with images of what had happened. With tears in her eyes and a hot face, she ran as far as she could and never looked back. That was 13 years ago, and sometimes faint visions of the past haunt her. The locket she wears around her neck was handed down to her by her mother, who got her from her mother and so forth. It passed down for 10 generations in the Kriger Family. Although Katana knows what the locket can do, she has yet to master how to use it. The locket itself was used to confuse the vampire coven that cursed her family with the women wearing the locket long enough for them to make an escape. Their family was always doomed to die. But Katana is choosing a different fate.

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Spelling/Grammar: 29/30
Very good stuff. Almost no mistakes, and the ones that were there were incredibly slight.

Originality: 20/30
This isn't the most original story we've seen here, but it has a good spin on it that breaks it out of any cliche for the most part. As she grows here, I expect great things.

Literacy: 25/40
You have a practical writing style that makes for a nice easy read, but with some good turns of phrase that keeps interest in.



Total: 74/100

Rate: 7.4/10

APPROVED!

Have your good lady go on down the Ghost Shipyards, m'am!

[`Katana Elaine]

okay so ive edited some things to better fit her. Hope it makes a little more sense. I haven't been on a rpg in 5 years! So if I am

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just let me know and ill fix it