J-Bear!
Junior
One With Billions Of Names; Student- Jatza, Dae [M:380][M:500][M:500][M:-410]
You are a very, very terrifying monster.
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Post by J-Bear! on Jul 8, 2007 13:43:18 GMT -5
Not a very good one, but oh well. It's called 'Golden Cup' as in a trophy, but that doesn't rhyme very well. It IS a rhyming poem. I don't really know what it's about, since I wrote it three years ago when I was ten, but I know I was mad when I wrote it. I think it's about war, but my mom thinks it's about her divorce. Here it goes.
Golden Cup
Another book is broken Another page is ripped We've stumbled and we've fallen We've grumbled and we've tripped. We are in despair But all hope is not yet lost The only question is What is the total cost? We've decided to try it Let's give it a shot There is no other option Many of us are caught This is not at all working Let's not lose all hope We might be able to do this We might be able to cope This has gone on too long We might as well give up I guess we just will never Get to hold that golden cup
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Post by L.A.C.R.I.M.O.S.A on Jul 8, 2007 13:57:31 GMT -5
This is awesome! And an inspiration to all who are trying to reach a dream. I think we can all relate to this one way or another.
I don't think you give yourself enough credit. =P I loved it. ^^ Very nicely done.
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J-Bear!
Junior
One With Billions Of Names; Student- Jatza, Dae [M:380][M:500][M:500][M:-410]
You are a very, very terrifying monster.
Posts: 1,263
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Post by J-Bear! on Jul 8, 2007 14:59:14 GMT -5
Awwwww, thanks!!! I was hoping something like that would be said. XD
Hehe, well, maybe not, considering I was ten . . . Thanks again!!!
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Post by Ladd Russo of the Russo Family on Jul 8, 2007 16:20:07 GMT -5
It's really nice, Jatza. =] You people all inspire Zawa so much. (A hard thing to do, since she is dead inside. DEAD I SAY! XD)
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J-Bear!
Junior
One With Billions Of Names; Student- Jatza, Dae [M:380][M:500][M:500][M:-410]
You are a very, very terrifying monster.
Posts: 1,263
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Post by J-Bear! on Jul 8, 2007 17:20:33 GMT -5
Thanks!!! Awwww, you're not dead inside. I hope. XD
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